Substantive editing sample 70:
What is a macro?

Here are some more malaprops produced by a nonnative writer of English. This text needs careful, painstaking attention from a substantive editor before it will resemble standard English technical text.

Note: The author of this piece was not a native English speaker. She very much appreciated the heavy commentary that explained my thinking behind the many suggested revisions. The highlighted comments elucidated for her many of the subtle peculiarities of American English.

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