Substantive editing sample 68:
Connecting the video interface cable

Though not a content expert (and not responsible for the technical accuracy of the content), a substantive editor must be alert to apparent contradictions in the text. Also, in the following sample, it doesn't hurt to repeat in step 2 (where it's appropriate) the gist of the caution message at the top of the page.

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